The Storyline

My story board has changed over the past couple of weeks. This is due to problems with filming and our cast member not being able to make the days organised between all of us. This meant that we had to do 3 separate days of filming. This meant that by the time we were onto the 3rd filming slot we had other ideas on what story to take.

We finally decided that this will be the story we are going to run:

We will start with the young version of the character (Aiden). He will be in bed and it will be late at night. We will get some still shots of him and then he will become restless in his sleep. The camera will then pan into his face so we can edit the shot to go into darkness then come back out into the title sequence.

The story will then cut to his girlfriend at the time. This will be a flash back which he is seeing in his dream. The female character (Katie) will be sitting on her laptop and relaxing in her room. She is going through a break up with (Aiden) and it brings her to tears when she is in her room. Suddenly the door bell rings and she goes to answer the door. She gets half way down the stairs and the doorbell rings again.This is to build tension. However the slow build up changes pace when she answers the door and the kid napper who remains unknown pulls her out the door by her neck. This keeps the audience on the edge of their seat because the tempo has changed so quickly. She will then be carried round the corner and that scene will end.

We will then start with the filming of the older, grown up version of the main character (Aiden). He will be lying in bed just how the younger version of him was at the start of the opening. He will then appear to wake from this flashback and come back into reality. The opening will stop when he wakes up and looks at the camera dead on.


The rest of the film would consist of the older version of (Aiden) finally realizing that what happened to his X girlfriend was not an accident and he will track down the men and women who did it to be with her at all costs. It will fit into the thriller genre through violence mentally and physically. It will hit the audience physiologically and will keep them on the edge of their seats.